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Empty shells
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Posted by Vasile Moldovan Sun, May 27th 2007, 05:02 :: English
Empty shells everywhere...
the souls of the snails only
on the autumn sky

(Romanian)
Cochilii goale...
sufletele melcilor
pe cerul toamnei

  

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scots translation: tuim shalls a'whaur.../the sowls o the buckies anely/on the hairst lift
John McDonald Sun, May 27th 2007, 08:40  
  
در همه جا صدف هاي خالي.../تنهاروح حلزونها/ در آسمان پاييزي /
sarah Sun, May 27th 2007, 14:17  
  
Thank you, John and sarah.
Vasile Moldovan Sun, May 27th 2007, 15:20  
  
A fine one, Vasile! The sense of loss is quite effectively captured here.Great!
Keith A. Simmonds Sat, Jun 2nd 2007, 12:52  
  
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