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The piano
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| Posted by Maria Tirenescu Sat, Sep 30th 2006, 11:34 :: | |||
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The piano in corner – the pianist listens to the rain song
(romanian) Pianul la colţ – |
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| I don't know if in English this sounds as well as in Romanian: the piano is punished. Preposition "la" says so, not simple "there its position is". (Nu ştiu dacă în engleză sună aşa bine ca în româneşte: pianul este pedepsit.) | |
| Corneliu Traian Atanasiu Wed, Oct 11th 2006, 15:11 | |
| Can be abandoned, not punished...The pianist listens an other song. |
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| Maria Tirenescu Thu, Oct 12th 2006, 06:07 | |
| A memorable senryu Maria ~ But many would treat this as a haiku! | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Thu, Oct 12th 2006, 10:07 | |
| Maria, I like that hue, that shade of "la" from Romanian version where you didn't say "in" (position, abandoned only, not punished). It brings more information and has much more spirit. And a little humor imperative for senryu. | |
| Corneliu Traian Atanasiu Thu, Oct 12th 2006, 10:26 | |