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Hello Mr Edward Weiss. You may be interested in perusing Narayanan's excellent instructions on Haiku collected on this site. They have been like a manual for my way of haiku since 2002. The interesting thing is, these essays don't preach rules but show how haiku are written within and despite these rules, including the 5-7-5 rule. There are many exceptions to even the so-called "phrase and fragment". There can be haiku without kireji or implicit kireji. The "phrase and fragment" can be justified in various ways too. Narayanan has classified these meticulously. These are especially relevant:

http://www.wonderhaikuworlds.com/haikuandgenres-hrr.php


http://www.wonderhaikuworlds.com/haikuandgenres-terminology.php#Kireji


http://www.wonderhaikuworlds.com/haikuandgenres-suggestions.php



The instances of haiku which make or break these rules are of course more interesting than the rules themselves. Look forward to seeing more of your haiku.
Shyam Santhanam Wed, Oct 4th 2006, 18:06  
  

Welcome Edward Weiss to WonderHaikuWorlds.

It must be specially noted in this context for academic and aesthetic etiquette that the illustrious scholar/poet Jane Reichold constructed and expounded the "phrase and fragment theory". Here are the links to Jane's wonderful site.

http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiku.htm



In “HAIKU RULES THAT HAVE COME AND GONE
http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiku.htm#comego

Jane has also collected a nearly exhaustive set of Rules which will be useful to most Haiku practitioners. I have personally responded to each of these rules as a part of a learning process.
Please check below.



http://www.wonderhaikuworlds.com/haikuandgenres.php


http://www.wonderhaikuworlds.com/haikuandgenres-jane.php ~
Narayanan Raghunathan Thu, Oct 5th 2006, 01:08  
  

Here are my Haiku Theory Archives, with more on each subject ..... http://happyhaiku.blogspot.com/2000_07_01_happyhaiku_archive.html ..... Gabi Greve from Japan
Gabi Greve Sat, Oct 7th 2006, 01:25  
  

Great Thanks Gabi san for these Links ~ I will link it in all relevant places and also make further references when needed.
Narayanan Raghunathan Mon, Oct 9th 2006, 13:42  
  

Rules a good for those who need them.
Geert Verbeke Thu, Dec 28th 2006, 17:30  
  

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