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copyright Geert Verbeke
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| Posted by Geert Verbeke Sat, Nov 26th 2005, 06:58 :: English | |||
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she draws a tiger with a long tail on the window he grins to the passengers in the morning train |
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| Let's swap our haiku books! | |||
| Comments | |
| Really a very strange and specially humorous Tanka. It is very precise too. Thank you Geert. | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Tue, Dec 6th 2005, 07:15 | |
| This is filled with so much childish energy! I really, really like this. Good work. | |
| Bradley Bucsis Tue, Dec 6th 2005, 11:02 | |
| Yes, it's very relatable at the same time it has a unique child-like humour. Good going sir. | |
| Shyam Santhanam Wed, Dec 7th 2005, 08:08 | |