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| Posted by Marijo Sun, Jan 13th 2008, 01:49 :: | |||
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| Brought a chuckle to me, Marijo! It sounds like a senryu, and I just love it! | |
| Keith A. Simmonds Sun, Jan 13th 2008, 03:51 | |
| Good haiku Marijo. It has a precursor in Issa's "he tolerates / the dragonfly's glare / the Buddha" that enriches it (we have that haiku on our home page) ~ this is also more immediate and playful. | |
| Shyam Santhanam Sun, Jan 13th 2008, 09:34 | |
| scots translation: patio gairden/twa speuggies pike/on Buddha's heid | |
| John McDonald Sun, Jan 13th 2008, 17:58 | |
| Thank you Keith for appreciating my Buddha poem. |
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| Marijo Sun, Jan 13th 2008, 18:50 | |
| Thanks Shyam for comment. I have two Buddha statues in our patio garden one is bronze and the other is stone. One day I saw two sparrows picking on the bronze statue's head. It was kind of funny so I started jotting down what I saw. |
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| Marijo Sun, Jan 13th 2008, 19:00 | |
| Thanks John for scots translation. | |
| Marijo Sun, Jan 13th 2008, 19:09 | |
| Good Haiku Marijo ~ | |
| Narayanan Raghunathan Tue, Jan 15th 2008, 12:57 | |
| Thank you Narayanan. | |
| Marijo Wed, Jan 16th 2008, 01:00 | |
| Romanian translation: grădină interioară / două vrăbii cigulesc / capul lui Budda | |
| Maria Tirenescu Sat, Jan 19th 2008, 14:34 | |