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Hello Maria Tirenescu

There are some typo/grammar errors in the English translation. Please do the necessary.


something jump(jumps) inside.

Surprised, I was looking for but, arrived in the room

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Surprised that I arrived in the room looking for him,


beggins(begins)

criket' sing:)(cricket sings:)

Wishing to take him in a photo,the first frame was unclear

to

I wished to take a photo of him: the first frame was unclear


Finally, I catched him in a paper bag and put in a shoes box.

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Finally, I caught him in a paper bag and put him in a shoes box.

Next evening he didn't sing no more.

to

Next evening he didn't sing any more.

Next morning there was no more but I found a leave from which a little parcel failed, his dinner.

[This sentence I can't figure out But it is erratic in form.Please correct it.]

He escaped, I thought, he didn't like to live in, and now he is free.

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He escaped: I thought he didn't like to live inside, and now he is free.

In the evening, once again his sing

to

In the evening, once again his song

punctual soloist
the cricket's concerto
to eight o'clock

to

punctual soloist
the cricket's concerto
at eight o'clock
Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Aug 25th 2010, 09:51  
  
Thank you! I hope that is better.
Maria Tirenescu Wed, Aug 25th 2010, 15:17  
  
Hello Maria Tirenescu.

I notice two errors uncorrected. Please do the necessary.


criket' sing:

to

cricket sings:


Next evening he didn't sing no more.

to

Next evening he didn't sing any more.



Thank you.
Narayanan Raghunathan Wed, Aug 25th 2010, 21:27  
  
Thank you for the help!
Maria Tirenescu Fri, Aug 27th 2010, 13:45  
  
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